Thursday, July 29, 2010
Bill Clinton 130 or less
His education reforms were the primary focus of his speech, as he discussed a plan to reduce class sizes by hiring one hundred thousand new teachers. He proposes a “school construction tax cut” for schools to modernize and build new buildings.
He goes on to discuss a plan for more after school programs for up to half a million children. He intends there to be a partnership between public and private organizations as well as financial assistance from the government and fifty-five million dollars given by the Mott Foundation.
Tuesday, July 27, 2010
Pitch
Thursday, July 22, 2010
Opinion v fact.
Tuesday, July 20, 2010
Mayor Caterinicchia – For Gay Marriage
Mayor Caterinicchia is signing the Gay Marriage Resolution into Columbus law, he will not veto.
“I have decided to lead with my heart,” announced Mayor Daniel J Caterinicchia of Columbus as he discussed the change to his initial position on gay marriage and will be signing the resolution into law.
The new law has been in debate in city legislature before arriving at Caterinicchia’s desk. On Tuesday July 20, 2010, Caterinicchia announced his decision to sign the council resolution. This is a change from his standpoint up until the prior evening when the bill arrived at his office. Emotion breaks through his composure at times as he explains why this happened.
Caterinicchia has “wrestled with” his previous statements related to gay marriage. When the bill was passed through legislature and the final decision was his, it “forced [him] to search my soul for the right thing to do.” He feels that, “the right thing for me to do is sign this resolution.” Stating that his “opinions have evolved significantly.”
Caterinicchia insists that, “I owe all of Columbus an explanation for this change of heart.” He elaborates that he “just could not bring myself to tell an entire group of people in my community that they were less important.” He address people who may have found his changed position surprising explaining that, “all I can offer them is that I’m trying to do what I believe is right.” His daughter and members of his staff are homosexual and he wants “for them the same thing we all want for our loved ones “
“I couldn’t say to them that their marriage was any less meaningful than my marriage to my wife Rana.”
Comm 221 Profile Critique.
The profile of Dr. Jacob Rubinstein, Professor of Mathematics at Indiana University is interesting. The writer seems to channel the professor’s excitement about the topics he teaches. Its highly descriptive but it doesn’t use any other sources than the person being profiled and the observations of the writer.
The lede is a quote, which is something used more in magazine writing than news writing at least according to the course assignments of those classes. It’s an engaging hook, though. It also sets the mood for the rest of the story.
The article starts discussing Rubenstein and then the second half seems more like a tangent that went out of control. The rest of the article discusses eyeglasses and he is quoted about his opinion on the school of optometry. It seems odd with all the topics he has studied that eyeglasses would become a primary concentration.
There are a few spots that may need some smoothing out. There is no transition from Rubenstein’s introduction to the discussion of glasses. It’s a bit like hitting a wall.
Most of the piece is engaging and interesting. It’s an idea few people consider, the real effect of applied mathematics. The parts that might have been the most interesting were not discussed. The parts that are discussed are interesting, but with so much going on, it would be interesting to find out how many different ways this article could have been written.
Thursday, July 15, 2010
Voice Blindness
Imagine this: the phone rings, you answer it, the female voice on the other end speaks like they know you personally but the voice isn’t one you recognize.